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Famous last words by Floorsucker Famous last words by Floorsucker
I want you to write a short story about this. About 5 lines is enough. You'll be featured right here.

Part 3 of my short 'series' which follows the fabulous killjoys all going down one by one O3o
Part 1 [link]
Part 2 [link]
It's not really necessary to see them all, though. You'll get the idea with only this pic too.




Featured: "Where are your last words" by ~jazz-watson
"Well… Where are your famous last words now, huh?"

Inside. You just have to kill me, slit up my stomach and they'll be there. Breathing soft like unborn babies.

That's what Party Poison wanted to say. Out of his mouth came totally different mumblings. He cut the sentences in sharp parts. Each one hurt him. "Don't… Don't kill me. Please."





Go fave it here: [link]


EDIT: I'm just gonna feature everyone who wrote something. You guys are awesome~!

~KilljoyAtHeart [link]
~AutumnForAlways [link]
~Piepin [link]
~adorkableXbabyXwhale [link]
~sutoribenda [link]
~Eternity-Beckons [link]
~dangerkid2019 [link]
~transnoctem [link]
*withinmeloveresides1 [link]
~schizophrenic-clown [link]
~RedMinimum [link]
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adrenalineraincloud Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
nice!!!
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Red-Wolf-26 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know this is very late, but I was going through my favourites and this was in it so I decided to quickly write something.

'The white blinded Poison, glaring down at him and imprinting itself into his brain. Blinking, he turned his head and the world careered off its axis, tumbling from under him. Blinking, his eyes focused on the gun pointed at his head, wavering slightly in its owner's grip. Poison looked up and met Korse's eyes, which were unnerving in their intensity, conveying none of the uncertainty his shaking hands did. There was a second of contemplation for each man. One contemplated his imminent death, the other the consequences.
"Where are your famous last words, now, huh?" Korse whispered, his voice low and threatening, the words grating against the back of his throat.
Poison just stared, feeling his head pound relentlessly, before glancing away from Korse, managing to yell, "Viva la révolution!"
Then the world exploded.'
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shybaby63080 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
thats amazing..... great job
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconredminimum:
RedMinimum Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome work. It radiates emotion, you really made an amazing work. The lips have a little something, maybe...I don't know. That's amazing. The reference to that specific song maybe c:

oh. and in the excitation, I wrote a little prompt, as you were asking for. It's a little late, but well. [link]
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oohh thank you soo much!
Thanks for you prompt! Doesn't matter it's late c:
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Delia-Doom Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
wow this is amazing! the look on his face is so tragic!
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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:iconladyofgaerdon:
LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Professional Writer
Hello! Your piece has been featured here. Kindly :+fav: the article, if you wish, to bring attention to the artwork and the contest. Thanks! :)
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!
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6BanitKrawl6 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this is fucking awesome
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!!
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schizophrenic-clown Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Student Writer
I wrote a little story about your fabulous drawing~
[link]
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome! Thanks for writing~
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schizophrenic-clown Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Student Writer
No problem~
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withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Student Writer
Here's my little story on your drawing! [link]
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome! Thanks for writing!
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withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Student Writer
welcome!
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:iconwithinmeloveresides1:
withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Student Writer
Very cool! I like how you do a throwback to Black Parade
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! I really like throwbacks C:
Someone who wrote a story about this made a throwback to Revenge... Now I just need someone to make one to Bullets and we're complete XD
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withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Student Writer
Oh! If your able could you link me to the story? It sounds interesting!
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
[link]
Yeah it's interesting~
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:iconwithinmeloveresides1:
withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Student Writer
danke! and it definitely was!
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aahh sprichst du Deutsch?
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:iconwithinmeloveresides1:
withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Student Writer
Ein bisschen :XD: Und du?
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, ich lebe in den Niederlanden, so mein Deutsch ist nicht sehr sehr gut.. Aber es geht ^^
Hahaha ik heb zo'n hekel aan duits XD
Sorry, I really hate it XD
Multilingual messages ftw
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Neutron10586 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Awesome! Well done picture, especially the shadows and hair Gerard! :D
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!!
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transnoctem Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
"Well... Where are your famous last words now?"

I stare at the leering face of the man who is about to kill me. Famous last words? No, I don't think I'll give him the satisfaction.

"Going to go silently? Tell me one thing, then. Just one. Was it worth it?"

Being held at gunpoint can be jarring. So is knowing you're about to die. But I don't think anything has ever shaken me as much as this question. The only reaction I'm capable of is a disbelieving smile.

"You just don't get it, do you?"

After one look at his face, I close my eyes. Death by raygun is instantaneous, so the pain in my chest can only be from the bittersweet realization about the man who thinks himself the victor.

It's true. He does not get it. He actually doesn't.
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for writing!
Nice!
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transnoctem Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very welcome!
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Thewalkerway Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011
hahahahahaha, pretty funny xD
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahhaha Party Poison dies, you laugh XD
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dangerkid2019 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
For me it would be:

As Korse smiled and cocked his head to the side, he asked a simple question for the killjoy to answer. "Well... Where are your famous last words now, huh?" Party Poison's brain racked for an answer. He couldn't find one. Korse's smile widened. Suddenly, all fear disappeared from Party's eyes. He no longer was afraid of dying. Korse positioned the gun perfectly under Party Poison's chin. Party Poison's eyes were challenging him. Korse pulled the trigger. But something miraculous happened. Party Poison had said something that confirmed the belief that killjoys never die. After he pulled the trigger, smoke emitted from the gun. Once it cleared, two words were spoken. "You missed."
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really cool~!
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dangerkid2019 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:XD: Thanks!! But that's just what goes through my head. Not necessarily an entry :D
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very welcome! Hahha, oh well, the drawing shouldn't be taken too serious though.
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dangerkid2019 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:XD: Yeah.... but it could be
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ZeeJustZee Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Student Writer
Gerard's answer:

Up your ass!
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahahahha XD
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:iconzeejustzee:
ZeeJustZee Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Student Writer
:D
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dangerkid2019 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww man!!! Amazing!!
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!!
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:iconmissybang:
missybang Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Hobbyist
tru
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks~ I guess
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:iconmissybang:
missybang Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist
^^
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animezfan Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011
...wow....nicely thought of wityh the wording?
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:iconfloorsucker:
Floorsucker Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
I guess?
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animezfan Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
i love your drawing style
but..poor gee?
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